Bear

By Kahdai

Wed, 04 Aug 2010
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If I ever in my life had thought
there would always be one person
could always rely on to be there
I wouldnt expect it of you kbear

you just always were & are still
miles away yet every day in mind

So believe in unbreakable loves
that of parent and child, us too
so on the day I will need brother
stand in, as I mothered you as mine.

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Submitted by shoe on
A beautiful sentiment, especially like "believe in unbreakable loves" I don't quite get the last line though,:}

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I agree with Shirley - that line is beautiful! Well done ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
hello shoe, how yu bein? its how someone isnt your child, yet still you mother over them asif they are hehe! wow thankyou both, I still believe! K ;) xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by darkenwolf on
short and sweet; nice :)

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks fenrir ;)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by darkenwolf on
You are most very welcome ;)