Haunting in my shadow-light
By Kahdai
Sun, 19 Sep 2010
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You stand in shadow-light
nothing yet a ghost to me
Surely I had forgotten it
the way he looked into me
I can hardly remember the
insignificant years stole
from this innocent memory
That does not matter now,
I should not even see the
ghost now standing slyly
behind the fear reflected
in my damn deep dark lake
I wishing I could not see
your haunting words still
torturing doubts from me.
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Love the two-stanza split
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love the two-stanza split here, Kahdai! A beautiful yet haunting poem. Just a little typo; 'slyley' should be 'slyly' :)
Magic xxx
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Kahdai, I totally agree with
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Kahdai,
I totally agree with Magic, this is so haunting and
readable.
Jenny.
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