Living with trains
  By seashore
Mon, 25 Oct 2010    
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    Morning breaks
As sweet bird songs lure me
Forgetting that nature fakes
It's prelude to the real overture.
So I wait
For the first train,
Moving soft and swift,
A mere ripple across my conscious mind,
A thoughtful driver's gift
To the sleeping, sleepless kind.
Still waiting
When here they come with harsher sounds
Metal on metal, steel on iron
Man-made cacophony gouging fresh wounds.
The earth quakes;  at the next vibration
I'm out of bed and smashing my fist
Against the window
Until I'm splintered with glass.
As the blood oozes from my shattered wrist
The next train to pass
Hoots with derision.
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What a truely expressive
    Permalink    Submitted by skinner_jennifer on   
  What a truely expressive piece.
Jenny.
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wow, such a striking piece.
    Permalink    Submitted by maggyvaneijk on   
  wow, such a striking piece. I'm in love with it in a weird and wonderful way. The title alone caught my attention. There's so many powerful images, the shattered wrist and the cacophony of sounds.
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Like the way it moves from
Like the way it moves from gentle to violent, and the splintered glass image, great!
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Love the line "to the
Love the line "to the sleeping, sleepless kind.' Well worked and congrats on cherry.
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