IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT

By skinner_jennifer

Thu, 10 Feb 2011
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In the darkness of the night,
stalking through copsewood,
the feline,
her eyes wide open,
body rigid,
she spies an owl with beedy eyes,
follow a bat,
through the skies,
seeking for to suprise,
the moth that's flying by.

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Submitted by Highhat on
Very close to nature Jenny- well done ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thanks for reading and commenting Pia, this was just a quick poem I put together, that I liked the sound of and enjoyed writing. Jenny.

 

Submitted by apeljo on
Very nice! I know what you mean about the ones you enjoy writing, they just pour out! I can tell how well my poems flowed by the amount of lines I scratch out, I never erase anything!

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi apeljo, you are very understanding of my work, I love to read your comments, you seem to know exactly where I'm going. I think that your writing is great and as long as you get pleasure out of it, that's all that matters. Again thankyou for reading and commenting. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
A lovely cat poem Jenny! x K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, I love to watch cats, when they don't know you are watching them, they are such mysterious creatures. I have actually been told I have a cat as a guardian angel, I like that idea. Thankyou again for your kind comment and for reading. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Aaw thats lovely I have drawn angel cats before! I do too useto have three! :) K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Wow! Kahdai, you have cats as angels too, that is great, apparently the cat that is my guardian angel, used to get thrown out of the house alot by its owners, I don't know if it was my grans, because she used to breed persians, so maybe it was one of hers, I really don't know. Thanks for coming back to me. Jenny.