Love Song to the Universe (Poetry Monthly)

Cherry

By Philip Sidney

Sat, 12 Dec 2015
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i am small 

             a tiny dot  shrinking beyond   <  invisibility...

at the centre of the screen    

♦      

after all the lights are off

YOU would not miss me even if you noticed that i had been  ⇒ here X

 

then         

 

g0ne.

 

I sing the white noise song of eternity 

                                                                     always at the beginning         no end…

 

I nestle against you to find comfort

to forget how vast you are           and              that I-am-a-part-of-YOU

I ignore your laws and bend my own

to fit against a shape                                         I cannot comprehend 

 

We watch segments of our story flicker their neon tails through the dark spaces 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

glimpses of a song that goes on and on and on.

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Thanks for reading celticman :)

Submitted by catherine poarch on

Can't pretend I understand it all. But it's fascinating. Leaves a huge vast picture and a feeling of both smallness and safety.

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Thanks Catherine, I suppose it is rather obtuse, TV and the universe, probably only makes sense to me but I'm glad you managed to get something from it.  :)

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Helen

Very clever and interesting to read, whether we totally understand it or not.

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Thank you Jean!  smiley

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

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Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Very profound and artistic!

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Thank you so much Accidentally :)

Submitted by Alicia In Wonderland on

Awesome work :) really well thought out and executed.