Gloaming
By fatboy74
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Nice to see you back. Your
Nice to see you back. Your verse has a dreamy quality somehow, of persevering when the way has been hard, but there is comfort and some stability, and enjoyment in the surroundings even in the dark and rainy days.
I do like the 'fat snails with heads braced like bulls''. and the wind picking its way. Rhiannon
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not better, just different
not better, just different from here. the analogy with snails and bulls and slugs and us mugs make you think.
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A quiet reflective piece
A quiet reflective piece (acceptance of the way things are?) - would love to hear this being read. How nice to see you posting again!
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The title, and the first line
This has a lovely melancholic feel to it. The title, and the first line takes you straight there and keeps you there until the end, when you want to go back and read it again, which of course I did.
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This dreamy poem is our
This dreamy poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Get a fantastic reading recommendation everyday
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Enjoyed this fb - good to see
Enjoyed this fb - good to see you posting on Abc again!
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This made me long for things
This made me long for things in my past, such a stunningly conveyed snatch of lost things just out of reach and an injection of the now always moving us on and out of ourselves. Hypnotic. Lovely to read you again, fb.
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'not better than here,'
'not better than here,' sometimes that's enough, to know that.
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It's so long since I've read
It's so long since I've read any of your work F B. You have always been one of my favourite poets, because you always manage to come up with something so original. Like this poem which takes the reader to a place of acceptance.
Jenny.
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