Poppy Tanka

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 08 Nov 2018
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Appreciation
of sacrificial service,
peace-seeking, -keeping;
protectors from evil, harm –
young men and women defend.

[November Poetry Monthly Theme: haiku and tanka]

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Poetry Monthly
Miscellaneous
Love

Comments

Submitted by Jane Hyphen on

Very neat and tidy, to the point and clean to read. I must look into this haiku, I bet it takes a lot longer than one might imagine.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jane.
I hadn't ever tried either the haiku or tanka, but surprised myself, after the Poetry Monthly pompt came out, by finding first some thoughts on winter coming into the form of the haiku, and then this idea of using the poppy for a five-lined tanka that might work. They are so brief and have to be concise, so can be very effective sometimes I guess. Rhiannon