Put The Sword Down

Had to read this a few times but it was worth it - thank you

carefully crafted to reflect fragmentation of thought displaced by ever present unwanted memory.

Excellent

best as ever

Lena

A clever and thoughtful way to bring the great difficulties to notice. Rhiannon

With Remembrance Day on the horizon, this layered poem is poignant and very relevant.

It is today’s Facebook, X/Twitter and BlueSky Pick of the Day.

Congratulations, Ewan.

Very orginal and a lilttle bit Rubic cube or like a maze. I can read it one way but want to keep looking at other ways in too, wrongly or rightly. I like the downward shape of the words.