Three sips of foaming wine.

By rask_balavoine
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Yesterday came to an end. The cold, winter sun slithered quietly into the ocean and day turned into night while I took one sip of remarkable wine that was strangely laced with all the kisses and punches of a life lived on the surface of the waters like an electric blue dragonfly.
In that one sip I tasted refuge: it was like sailing into a small, calm harbour in northern France at sunset in September 1853 after days on an open, stormy sea, my hands shredded with rope-burn that would take weeks to heal and my lips split, swollen and parched.
Just one more sip and worlds I knew nothing and everything about opened again in my heart, tight rose buds responding to morning sunshine, relaxing and giving themselves in shy confidence to the new day, knowing that by evening their petals would look a bit tatty and their perfume would fade with the setting sun.
One last sip, and the clamour of market places and battlefields crowd the space under the yew tree in the graveyard where I’ve taken shelter. The goblet trembles and the wine within it foams; the scent of fresh death rises from trampled grass. I thought to myself, “If that’s what one sip can do, where might a full bottle take me?”
I’d better not.
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I hope you did!
I hope you did!
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This wonderfully rich prose
This wonderfully rich prose-poem from Rask Balavoine is Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
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Why was the dragonfly blue?
Why was the dragonfly blue? I rarely drink wine. When I do it's chilled white. Like the tango of language here. Inebriated softly. Good job.
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Gosh, this make me want to go
Gosh, this make me want to go and and buy an expensive bottle of wine and drink it while the sun sets and I don't even drink wine. I'd better not.
The dreamy language took me on a wonderful trip.
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Sipping
It's amazing how a glass of wine or something similar can bring such deep thought and enjoyment to the mind, showing it's possible to enjoy alcohol without becoming intoxicated. I love it when that happens and I love your description of how it happened to you.
Turlough
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