Cinquain: Yellow

By Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun, 25 Jan 2026

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Cinquain: Yellow

I stand
as life buffets me,
challenging my right
to live with contentment
and achieve my dreams at last

Frances Macaulay Forde ~ 2000
Photo: Tulips at Araluen by FMF © 2000

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Permalink Submitted by TJW on Sun, 2026-01-25 16:44

I don't believe you have a right to live with contentment. You earn the privilege of living contendetly. Nice pic.

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Permalink Submitted by Frances Macaula... on Sat, 2026-01-31 19:00

You're absolutely right, poetic license... thank you for reading.

Best.

Frances.

Permalink Submitted by TJW on Sat, 2026-01-31 19:07

Best

V/R