ip attempt

By Kahdai

Sat, 31 Jul 2010
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I don't know what to write about this saint
I didn't know her atall, stranger til today
she does sound a funny character to me tho
expect I'd like her and she'ld not like me
this impossible astonishing Saint Christina.

Certificate U
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Submitted by jennifer on
don't and didn't need apostrophes, and names are proper nouns and should have capital letters - 'Saint Christina'. It's a good idea to proof-read your work before posting - leave it for an hour and then come back with fresh eyes, that usually helps me! J x

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks J x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "