Me

By Highhat

Sun, 02 Oct 2011
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12 comments
 

Don’t drip, ooze your ME
over my I
I don’t want to drip, ooze my I over you.
Oozing my I over ME
and ME over my I
and over your YOU
,I and ME.
Hey where are am I going?
Where are you going?
We can gather our I’s, ME’s
and YOU’s together and meet
at the bus shed and take 301
to town; buy a coffee and
Blueberry pie, talk about the weather
and enjoy the view.
And your I, ME and YOU
and my I and ME
will probably have a splendid time,
all rolled into two
individuals- you and yours truly,
Me-!

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Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
And I and ME found YOU and YOUR poem intriguing. ME, I and YOU and YOURS can go and have some Blueberry pie and Talk about the YOU, ME and the WHATEVERS! FASCINATING. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
you made me laugh- thanks Jenn- an appropriate comment. Love to have Blueberry pie with you! ;)Pia

Submitted by oldpesky on
Has the world went completely bonkers?

 

Submitted by Highhat on
It's balmy Sunday OP- hadn't you noticed? Here is proof!

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Highhat hello! very clever worked out poem, now I know why? stopped in to-day? Thanks julie xx

Submitted by oldpesky on
I'm still none the wiser. Think I better go have a lie down.

 

Submitted by fatboy74 on
odd but strangely enjoyable Pia. :-)

 

Submitted by Highhat on
Thank you Fatboy for stopping by. ;)Pia

Submitted by Overthetop1 on
Well I loved this Pia. It's neat, quirky and funny. ME being ME, I related to this, which is probably quite worrying. You can pour your ME over my I whenever you want.

Overthetop1

Submitted by Highhat on
Oh I am so glad that you seem to have understood it and could relate to it OTT- then we have a few things in common. You seem to be the only one who's got it so far. loved your last piece- right up my alley- ;)Pia

Submitted by ScoZen on
Hej HH I am on a "...301 to town;..." thinking about this one. Need to have a word with OTT. Passe pa.
ScoZen

Submitted by Highhat on
It was actually meant quite seriously ScoZen but got a humourous twist when it was finished. But thanks for reading. you pas på også ;)Pia