I am (version three)

By andrew-evans

Sun, 05 Sep 2010
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I am the greatest
predator in the world,
the smartest living thing,
I can manipulate simple tools
for more advanced use,
I can climb mountains
I can swim oceans,
I can destroy the world
with the push of a button.

I am the human race

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Submitted by celticman on
all true, but...

 

Submitted by andrew-evans on
But?

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I'm enjoying thee I am poems

 

Submitted by jennifer on
Can't help but think the last line needs a full stop and even a line break to separate it from the rest, since it is such a powerful statement! This reminds me of my College Biology teacher, who used to say 'Humans are the virus of the earth!' in doom-laded tones at regular intervals! J x

 

Submitted by andrew-evans on
Thanks for the suggestion. It is very true though, we are everything bad that has happened to the planet, however we are also all the improvents, so it's all swings and roundabouts

 

Submitted by jennifer on
Improvements? One might argue that one cannot 'improve' nature. Alter it, maybe. J x

 

Submitted by andrew-evans on
Thats true, yes we can not improve the world, just alter it to suit us as humans