Trees

Cherry

By Beeme

Fri, 04 Feb 2011
  • 2286 reads
12 comments
 

The
horizon
once thick
with
vibrant
olive-drab
trees

now melts
in bone-
white
light

igniting
in the
sun
an amber
glow,
marbled
corpses.

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
this is beautiful beeme - wonderful imagery. Was it from a photograph or a painting? one thing: should it be "melts"?

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so very much Insert! :] It was from a photograph. Glad you enjoyed xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so much SundaysChild! Really happy you enjoyed! Thank you for the cherry abctales :] Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by seashore on
Beeme - what I like about your work is your individuality. This is special. xx

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Bone-white light is wonderful. 24 words that are beautifully put together. ATB fb

 

Submitted by rjnewlyn on
Yes, very good. I liked the melting horizon and the marbled corpses. Rob

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Awwh thank you so much Seahore, I'm happy you enjoy my work so much xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so very much Fb! your praise means a lot. Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Rob. Glad you enjoyed :] Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Beeme, what a wonderful picture you conjure up here, full of vibrant colours, so much you have managed to get in, in such a small space. Love it and congratulations on the cherries. Thanks for the read. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Seems we both had 'amber' on our minds tonight, Beeme;-) A wonderful poem and showing some real versality in your ever increasing repertoire of poetry. Much enjoyed. Tina xx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank so very much Jenny And Tina :]Really happy you both enjoyed :] Beeme xx

k.