The Spent Fountain
By hilary west
Sat, 30 Jun 2012
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Marbled waters were Architecture for a natural spring,
Its constant current, A Divine power.
You drank for refreshment in the burning sun,
Raining, it became One with the elements.
Jet spraying force massaged a naked man in a jacuzzi.
In the evening, gentled waters caressed the Brussels Boy.
Onyx of the basin superceded the falling cascade,
A lover's meeting place, deserted.
Bijou pebbles were now dry and the fountain was spent.
It had danced like a sylph, not aided to pattern like Spirograph.
What do you prefer ........... to look or to see?
Mother-of-pearl seas had fed the fountain.
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I like this, hilary. Have
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I like this, hilary. Have read it several times now, and get more out of it on each read.
I don't know why, but I get the feeling there is much written between those eloquent lines. Loved stanza three:-
"Jet spraying force massaged a naked man in a jacuzzi.
In the evening, gentled waters caressed the Brussels Boy."
Extremely illustrative.
SSS;-)
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