To the sea

Cherry

By hoalarg1

Sun, 21 Feb 2021
  • 505 reads
4 comments
 

I go to the water's edge
Fall victim
Stone still
The land of lungs
Where breaths erase
Walled castles
Lover's names.
I pivot
Watch footprints
Fizz and fill and go
Wiped clean, as if in dream.
I pull plugs on thoughts
Empty them
Through cupped ears of giant waves
Withstand every break they make
My sunken feet root to solid ground
Benchmark in the sand
Ready to discover, now ready to be found.

Certificate U
Poem
Rainbow World
Nature

Comments

Submitted by onemorething on

Great last line. Love land of lungs and the sound of an ocean in this. :)

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thank you. Really glad you liked it.

 

Submitted by marandina on

Some great lines in there. I agree "The land of lungs, Where breaths erase...." is wonderful.

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

You're very kind. Thank you for posting your comments. I certainly felt like I was there when writing it.