Encounter of the magic kind (I.P.)
By Kahdai
Sun, 08 Aug 2010
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Many tiny night wings
flitted above my head
a number of fair folk
lifted me from my bed
They carried me softly
with cool air round me
to this edge of a lake
playing a lively music
'til I was happy awake
Deep on top of a mountain
mist in the valleys below
we danced until a sunrise
turned the black sky blue
then clouds begin to show
I realised where I was almost at once
in the top of the red dragons volcano
where whoever stays night at the lake
he descend either a mad man or a poet
And with that, they took to the hills
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new Kahdai I like this,and
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Kahdai
I like this,and you have managed
to work in your poem,at the end
for the (IP)
and with that,thay took to the hills.
I enjoyed all,last stanza for me.
I realised where I was almost at once
in the top of the red dragons volcano
where whoever stays a night at the lake
he descends either a mad man or a poet
And with that,they took to the hills
julie xx
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Hi Kahdai, This a
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai,
This a fantastical poem, which takes you to
another world. Really enjoyed this one, almost
wish it could have gone on.
Also lovely words.
Jenny.
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