I create
By Kahdai
Thu, 25 Nov 2010
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I breath in glass
and turn numb as my
view of my earth starts to spin
eyes slowly turned back within time
I look down at the earth spinning
watch cartographers attempts to
recreate my oceans and every
coastlines, every shore,
cliff to stone, pepple
grain of sand, roots
and my leaves,
the touch of sunlight
on the soil I
carefuli aligned,
seed from mind.
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Hello Kahdai, what beautiful
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Hello Kahdai,
what beautiful words. I love this poem.
Thankyou for the read.
Jenny.
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Yes they are very beautiful
Yes they are very beautiful words- so profound
;)Pia
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This is great Kahdai and
This is great Kahdai and quite beautiful. I love that 'touch of sunlight on the soil I carefully aligned' - really good. :-)
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The title and your first
The title and your first line made me want to read more and I'm glad I did. Nice one, Kahdai.
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