Waiting to be ready for my time

By Kahdai

Tue, 27 Jul 2010
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Forget the emotions
feel only the motion
ignore any memories,
concentrate now on
all around us that
reaches alert minds.

Here I am watching
feeling as the world
turns around me for
to be ready for my
time when it comes.

Now I am waiting as
my strength fills up
so I can be, be ready
for a second chance
if it ever day comes.

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
One suggestion I came up with was "Ready and Waiting" Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks, I like that & thanks for reading it! k

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Highhat on
"Time to be " came up with me ?? but I think Jenny's suggestion is very good. Pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
Ah yeah that maybe too! I might roll em together somhow... time to be ready?... thanks pia x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by ioanad on
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Submitted by Highhat on
eh what?

Submitted by rjnewlyn on
"So I can be ready" would be my suggestion. I liked this - the repetition. I think it would work well as a song, albeit a slightly off-beat one, or a poem set to music. Rob

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yeah I think it is offbeat, thats a name worked out now. Thankyou for comment Rob! K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "