Waiting to be ready for my time
By Kahdai
Tue, 27 Jul 2010
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Forget the emotions
feel only the motion
ignore any memories,
concentrate now on
all around us that
reaches alert minds.
Here I am watching
feeling as the world
turns around me for
to be ready for my
time when it comes.
Now I am waiting as
my strength fills up
so I can be, be ready
for a second chance
if it ever day comes.
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One suggestion I came up
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
One suggestion I came up with was "Ready and Waiting"
Jenny.
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"Time to be " came up with
"Time to be " came up with me ?? but I think Jenny's suggestion is very good.
Pia
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"So I can be ready" would be
"So I can be ready" would be my suggestion.
I liked this - the repetition. I think it would work well as a song, albeit a slightly off-beat one, or a poem set to music.
Rob
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