Fast flier

By maisie

Wed, 30 Oct 2013
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Fast Flier

He flies the storm as high
as the starlings in a blue sky.

It amazes me the passage
of life, the boundaries,
the quagmire of relationships.

Where does it end?
Not like it used too, with
definite direction to heaven.

Sometimes you hear them -
pass by, incandescent figures
as sharp as love is.

(c) RJL

 

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Comments

Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on

Ethereal and intriguing.  (couple of typos)  Enjoyed.

Linda

Submitted by Bee on

Hi Maisie. I enjoyed this, too. 

Bee

Submitted by Art of the Diver on

'As sharp as love is'

Nice one - well stated... thank you for sharing your talents.  Take care

Rob

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Beautifully written maisie and a pleasure to read.  Jenny.

 

Submitted by maisie on

thank you all, I'm touched.  It was a first draft written in reaction.  I will go get them typo's...

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by celticman on

sharp as love' that's quite enigmatic.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi Maisie smiley I enjoyed reading this short, but well executed poem, well done.

 

Keep Smiling

Keep Writing smiley

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by maisie on

Thank you all, I've added it to my free ebook for the ebook exchange on Rick Lupert's big free exchange, happens on the 1/12 each year...

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!