Cadiz

By Parson Thru
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The world’s a shit place,
It’s true, I said,
As I stroked the lace
That circled her leg
Tyres drummed
On the old port road,
Motos buzzed
Past the door
All we can do is live,
She said,
And I had to agree,
There’s little more
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nicely sparse, though it says
nicely sparse, though it says everything necessary. I wondered where you'd been!
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Cadiz
always used to make me think of Drake and The Armada... I liked it, but it wasn't what I expected.
I really like this poem, sometimes less really is more... (and other times, it isn't, of course :-D )
Gibbous House: Ewan's First Novel
No Good Deed : Ewan's Second Novel "the same as the first, a little bit louder and a little bit worse"
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Grounding your poem to Cadiz
Grounding your poem to Cadiz adds all those connotations of history, beginnings and endings, I really like it.
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