Pain
By psizan
Tue, 04 Apr 2017
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This is a very heartfelt
This is a very heartfelt piece. I particularly liked the last stanza, where you bring up the idea of a broken heart, the loss of love, also being a form of bereavement. I also admired the four lines beginning 'And' in the second stanza, which build up a rhythm, a bit like someone banging on a door, and we get a real sense of desperation. I hope that time will be a healer for the person in this poem.
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