Dissolution
By queen beatle
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like they'd laid
that silver trail themselves, that
snake-child of soil and moon,
they
—turn back
—strain dim fingers
towards the roomless roof,
the fading, merging
with them—
to see the way they've made, they—
sense arrival, or
tense for more
departure, as
one from the other — the geode frac /
tures / the shatters of the
glim shades, glinting,
refracting into
mist, to—
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Your words really capture the
Your words really capture the essence of the painting. I like the lines:-
Strain dim fingers
towards the roomless roof,
the fading, merging
with them
It makes me think of the couple merging into one with the woods.
Lovely poem.
Jenny.
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I googled the artist and his
I googled the artist and his picture to understand the poem, and yes, I thought it works so well to convey the mysterious quality.
Dougie Moody
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