The Busy Middle
By Rhiannonw
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(Central London)
Hustle, bustle, rush and crush,
busy people pushing past
want to reach their ‘somewhere’ fast;
hoping they will soon have quitted
all this whirl, and noise emitted:
evening haven – peace at last,
temporarily outcast.
Mass of traffic: stop and go,
intermittent bulky flow,
people wending in and out
(– what’s the hurry all about?).
Giant steel and concrete cages
towering over (from past ages)
odd-shaped ‘squares’ (where churches squeeze)
with muted noise, and welcome trees.
Sharp towering Shard of glistening glass,
thrust up among the grounded mass
that shelters motley working throng.
It doesn’t seem to quite belong –
an icy thorn from glacier torn
to dominate with gleam and shimmer –
this spikey sliver sparks a shiver
puncturing sky above the river.
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this is a London I recognise,
this is a London I recognise, espcially the bustle, rush and crush.
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I particularly like your
I particularly like your description of the shard, Rhiannon. A good piece.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
I too really like this piece. The rhythm is busy and rushed too, which adds to the effectiveness.
You managed to get an awful lot in for such few lines.
Jean
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I enjoyed this too, again,
I enjoyed this too, again, particularly the section about the Shard!
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You've captured the chaos of
You've captured the chaos of the City perfectly in this Rhiannonw. Thanks for entering the comp.
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