The Long and the Short of it

By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 10 Apr 2011
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A dozen or more golden-orfe,
refreshed from their winter sleep
swim, just below the surface
of his pond – mouths agog.
His grizzled, tabby cat, curled up
and dozing; tousled fur – polka dot
spotted, with petals from a plum-tree.
He’s had a full life, and a good one,
he maintains, as he sits – grey head
nodding; an April day, masquerading
as a June one.
A gentle breeze, slowly turns the pages
of his book. Doesn’t care for the long
lines of a novel; prefers instead,
or so he’ll tell you, the short truth
of a poem...
squeezes the hand of his pretty,
young nurse, as she helps him stand,
which says more than both.
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'an April day,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'an April day, masquerading
as a June one.'
- a wonderful image, Tina! It's been a beautiful April day today - definitely like summer. A beauty of a poem ;)
Magic xxx
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Hi Tina, a poem of a gentle
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
a poem of a gentle elderly person, sitting in the
garden on an April day, masquerading as a June day.
Thinking of all the things that he has, just to be
sat there contented and happy.
Beautiful Tina, I love it.
Jenny.
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Hi Tina, The last 3 lines
Hi Tina,
The last 3 lines say it all.
This is very well composed, and lines 4 - 7... Brilliant
Steve
SteveM
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I'm already finding it
I'm already finding it difficult to get out of the chair but when it gets serious I hope you poems will still be around.
We have had wonderful weather here today as well
;)Pia
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Weather isn't everythng but
Weather isn't everythng but this poem says a lot. A very good one, Tina.
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Proper poem this Tina - 'the
Proper poem this Tina - 'the short truth' of poetry - really enjoyed it. :-)
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Packed with wonderful images
Packed with wonderful images in every stanza. One to return to over and over.
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lovely Tina - just the thing
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lovely Tina - just the thing for this weather. And I love the way you can conjure up such perceptive and thought provoking insights into a character that you must have dreamed up in the Sun.
Overthetop1
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This is lovely, Tina - spent
This is lovely, Tina - spent last couple of days in cinema with grandchildren watching `Hop' and then `Rio' so came to it late but well worth it. Now completely out of touch with grown-up language.
Anyway, this poem was much enjoyed.
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