urbane fox

Cherry

By torscot

Thu, 03 Apr 2014
  • 1259 reads
9 comments
 

not sly

as they say

this one

brazen

more like

 

la  passeggiata

in  fur

streaked  neon

and

sodium  light

 

beneath  the

yellow M

chicken in

the  skip

to  go

 

 

 

 

Certificate U
Poem

Comments

Submitted by Jessiibear on

I do like this. Flows well; great read. I'm encased in both symbolism and imagery.

One of the good ones, cherry picked or otherwise ;)

Jess

Submitted by torscot on

Hi Jess.

Thanks for reading.

A real fox from a nearby estate seen wandering over a foot bridge towards a fast food franchise

Cool as you like.

Kind regards.

ps due to pop into your posts for a read.

torscot

Submitted by Luke Neima on

Beautiful in its simplicity. The last paragraph kind of turns the other two around and gets you reading in loops. I really like the style, here - you really carve out a new perspective on things.

Submitted by torscot on

Hello Luke.

Many thanks for reading and your positive comments.

 "...I really like the style..."   Thus encouraged I  shall strive for another.

Thanks again and regards.

 

torscot

Submitted by Bee on

I really liked this, too.

Bee

Submitted by torscot on

And a thanks to you Bee for commenting.

I'm due to catch up on your little tales shortly.

Regards.

torscot

Submitted by VeraClark on

That cunning old fox, what a refreshing read. I got depth and economy and capitalism in one hit. 

 

Submitted by torscot on

Hello there VC

"...cunning old fox..."        That  really was me on my way to scrounge for leftovers

Thanks for reading

 

 

torscot

Submitted by torscot on

A late thanks to the Cherry pickers.

A real pleasure to be granted one, in a word chuffed.

Regards.

 

torscot