"morning unfolds" -tanka

By Tretchicovmanicova

Thu, 19 May 2022

5 comments

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a flowering branch
sways in the gentle breeze as
the full sun rises,
an unquiet robin tweets
another morning unfolds.

©'t. imaan tretchicovmanicova
19may22

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Thu, 2022-05-19 20:49

Love this little piece - nice to see you posting again too!

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2022-05-19 21:40

A crisp little picture conveyed. Rhiannon

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Fri, 2022-05-20 11:47

Captivating poem of the beauty nature holds and inspires.

Very much enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by Tom Brown on Fri, 2022-05-20 17:34

A chikd's mind is like a flower, it's just floating in the breeze -JimM.

Good! Cherries well deserved.

Tom Brown

Permalink Submitted by Tretchicovmanicova on Sat, 2022-05-21 17:32

Thank you for reading my work and all your kind comments.