On my laptop I'm tapping (Rhyme)

By well-wisher

Fri, 14 Aug 2015
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On my laptop I'm tapping

while the flowers are flapping

and the butterflies happily play.

And I take such delight in

just sitting here writing

I could sit in my garden all day.

 

While I work on a stanza,

its an extravaganza

of colours and fragrant perfumes.

If you seek inspiration

there's no better location

than a garden with flowers in bloom.

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Comments

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

How very sweet and jolly. I very much enjoyed the rhythm of this little ditty and was impressed with a nice rhyme for "stanza"

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Love this poem...there's something special about the garden at this time of the year, watching the bees at work and all the other insects going about their business.

It has a good rhythm and rhyme and is catchy when read out loud.

Thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Enjoyed, and could picture you sitting there, tapping (or being distracted by the  beauty and scents?!) Rhiannon