While my lover sleeps

By well-wisher
Thu, 24 May 2012
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Two bright stars lost within the land of dreaming;
they will not shine again till you awake.
A pretty rose that bursts with laughter gleaming
will stay a rosebud until next you speak.
Across your face, the wild and tangled sunlight;
the radiance you’ll straighten with a comb.
Your heartbeat and your breath, two wings of white;
the sweet sound of an angel flying home.
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All I can say is, this is
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
All I can say is, this is such a beautiful poem from
you JoHn.
Thankyou for sharing.
Jenny.
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Very pretty. A lovely poem
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Very pretty. A lovely poem for a very lucky person. Like it a lot.
Parson Thru
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Lovely poem, I love this
Lovely poem, I love this bit...
'Across your face, the wild and tangled sunlight;
the radiance you’ll straighten with a comb.'
...especially.
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