Earth Heart (3)
By london_calling79
Sun, 25 Jan 2015
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Yesterday, we trampled back into the woods where ageless rippled trunks split the sky, their backs erect despite wobbling lofty tops. In the times the coke bubbled on our tongues, the peace and the fury of our shouts echoed through these same winter trees. Our sharp eared dogs investigated river crevices, each one fascinating in turn accompanying soft burblings in cacophony discordant with thin throated excitement. Incumbent in trees we would lie and plot amongst the crows before they clapped their disapproval and abandoned their watch. The perilous heights and gulfs of streams so little to us then as rope burn and ankle twists. Dawn wetness was our enemy as saturnine horses turned to our emotion. The same unearthed danger squats in pitted soil wounds, sodden earth gaping. Dry wooden gates cracked our hands, splintering skin. The moss has settled here in its woollen softness, shipwrecked on its wooden island - it perseveres. Now, far from our home, we brush away the fond mud as accommodating tufts of once refreshing cold green, mired in quick soil, welcomes our legs back into the woods; remembering our shins as brambles now neck high leave their mark.
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Love how describe the land
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
Love how you describe the land and plants here, like the title too.
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plot against the crows, often
plot against the crows, often difficult but a lasting image.
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A lot of concentrated vivid
A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon
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This is beautiful, lc...so
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is beautiful, lc...so pictorial. I could almost smell the moss and feel the spitefulness of the brambles.
Fantastic writing.
Tina
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