Wish you were here

By Ed Crane
Mon, 02 Jul 2018
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An invitation from an old friend
to stay a while in Las Palmas
visiting old haunts again
walking Las Canteras
viewing Tenerife
Atlantic's breeze
Drago trees
much too
brief
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I liked that. The picture
I liked that. The picture drawn, but also, the form seems to suit it as I like the lines being self-contained so emphasising the thoughts being each slightly shorter, and the simple rhyme making the last word an emphasised finale. Rhiannon
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