Breath
By D G Moody
Tue, 14 Nov 2023
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Standing outside on
A frosty night, as our cold
Breath unfolds the stars
One by one until we have Passed, and the night has gone home.
© D G Moody 2023
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Possibly the first tanka I
Possibly the first tanka I have ever read. Interesting!
You have informed and inspired me.
Thank you very much.
Turlough
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I love this, charming and
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I love this, charming and neatly packaged. It's our Pick of the Day! Congratulations! Do share on social media if you participate in that sort of thing.
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This is our Poem of the Week!
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This is our Poem of the Week! Congratulations!
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Congratulations Dougie - what
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Congratulations Dougie - what a wonderful pick!
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