Red

By Frances Macaulay Forde
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Sometimes I make dollies - this one reminded me of a poem I wrote for a favourite niece.
RED
Red
is supposed to be
fiery tempered
liable to catch alight
at any time, smouldering
heat just waiting
to ignite – right?
That’s on the outside…
Her surface simmers
but inside she’s easily hurt,
has no confidence and
feels fat when she isn’t.
She just wants to be
loved for who she is.
Wants someone to see
past her red hair and
the stereo-typing.
Frances Macaulay Forde © 2008
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that's thoughtful. Of course,
that's thoughtful. Of course, sometimes, it works the other way too — the one feeling sensitive is unconsciously misjudging others herself too! Need encouragement to show interest and find that helps others to show interest in them. Rhiannon
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I like your association of
I like your association of red not only being a fiery colour, but also carrying the meaning of sensitivity. It's far too easy to stereotype people.
Respectful account in your poem Frances.
Jenny.
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This moved me more than I
This moved me more than I expected. There’s such tenderness in the contrast—bold outside, soft and aching inside. I think a lot of us carry a shade of Red.
Jess <3
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