Young Writers

 

Success

What is success? Is success simply my happiness? Is success my mental health? Is success connected to my heart? No I always wanted success to be...
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Cherry

She Left Her Mark

She was old, and she figured she had not long left. In the cast-iron pot, the water slowly came to a boil, writhing and popping. God, if she had a...

I'm So Not in the Mood

Can't you leave me alone? Can't you tell I'm mad at you? Can't you for once just leave? Can't you be less annoying? For once in your life Just go...

The Speech Writer Pt. 6

"Mara stop joking around! If I don't get to work on time I'm going to lose my job!" Pearl laughed. Mara was holding onto her leg as she tried to...

Those we lost (work in progress)

"It's already been a week, we won't find her!" That is all Damien could think about lying on his bed. He felt his sister got lost in the woods, but he would soon discover a dark secret.
Cherry

You're Fine; Try Harder

'No gluten, no caffeine, no lactose, no stress, All your own fault is this illness. Try yoga, meditation and peppermint tea, And all sorts of potions...
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Cherry

Zoom

Zoom Sitting by Zoom, In the dining room, Tempted to get another snack. He's buffering, I'm suffering, I should have bought a Mac. I try to focus, My...
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Man

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It is a man. A man, around the age of 70. His hair is barren white, with hints of gray on his sideburns. The wrinkles around his eyes are reminiscent...

The Speech Writer Pt. 5

Mara was Pearl's best friend. That was how it had been since basically forever. They met in grade two because of Manyo. He was being mean to Pearl...

How can I have more feeling in this scene without making this more cringy?

It's supposed to be KIND OF emotional, for it's one that marks the start of a change in one of my characters. (Keep expectations low lol) I provide a little bit of context, and then the scene itself. How can I accomplish the goal in the title, or make it better in other ways?