Mistake

By HarryC
Sat, 14 Feb 2026
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MISTAKE
The paint’s chipped where
you kicked the door shut
that night - not in anger then,
but the urgency of the moment:
the surge that began with the
brief brush of hand against hand,
the shift of sense,
the wrenching of certainties -
desire made flesh.
A dab would cover it -
a spot of white, erasing
as you would a misspelt
word, or a comma
misplaced.
But I leave it. I’d still
know it was there.
Better to do the job properly.
Or not at all.
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Paint chipped - metaphor for
Paint chipped - metaphor for a realtionship, I found quite telling,
Dougie Moody
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desire made flesh. something
desire made flesh. something biblical about that certainty (and uncertainty).
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It's a heart shaped chip.
It's a heart shaped chip.
Or is that my imagination ?
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