Something of Yours
By Angusfolklore
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I kept some things of yours to remember,
even though I would not forget:
notebooks with no good passwords
and reminders that are well past importance.
I kept some of the books, the shirts and watch.
But time takes its toll on treasured things,
clocks lose tongues, become silent.
Photos grow dim, colours dissipate,
the snapshot of you in the garden
could be anyone fifty years later.
Even the scrawled name on the back
has faded to near nothing.
Other people live in the houses where we lived.
The neighbourhood has people who speak nearly as we did,
but not the same, not quite, for even the accent shifts,
the dialect betrays over days, months, years, shedding words.
How they speak is not how we were (language makes us),
the incremental tide erodes away identity.
Last time I was there I saw some like you,
the same build, shape of the face,
who would not disgrace in an identity parade.
But never your gait, the glance, the way you
held yourself and navigated the streets.
Long spears of time are against us
(let us not pretend).
But I'm glad to be gone from there;
better imagining the place peopled
by flesh-and-blood ghosts
than the pale strangers who remain.
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wonderful Angus, thank you
wonderful Angus, thank you
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Pale strangers ...
Good poem, well done.
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Congratulations, this is today's Pick of the Day, 25th May 2026
Having read this three or four times today and found something different in it each time, it's our Pick of the Day today. Please share on your social media, fellow BC Tale-rs.
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Thanks, Angus. These are the
Thanks, Angus. These are the sorts of thoughts and observations that have been in my head a lot recently, so I had a lot of nods of recognition. Lots of echoes and sad smiles.
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