Untitled

By jasperhatsoff
Sat, 08 Sep 2012
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Why
Do you
Walk in the
Middle of the
Road when it is hot?
Is it because you are
Thinking of those long summers
Past when you sauntered down country
Lanes, grabbing at the seeded heads of
Grass, kicking mushrooms of dust as you scuffed
Your feet and breathed spoiled blackberries, sweetened hay
And the cloying scent of a bird fallen socket-
Eyed from its nest? Is it this you imagine when I
See you close your eyes and step off the pavement, arms swinging?
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Again, wow. This is my
Again, wow. This is my favourite of the three.
But I think you should give it a title, even if it's only a temporary Why Do You, or something. I always think that untitled pieces are unloved.
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Nice one, jasper;-) Tina
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Nice one, jasper;-)
Tina
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Great read. Oh! for those
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Great read. Oh! for those country lanes, without a
care in the world.
Really liked this poem.
Jenny.
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