For a years time

By Kahdai

Sun, 31 Oct 2010
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9 comments
 

Starting tomorrow
I must try change
only for one year
then back into me
because I knowing
it's all to prove
I am just myself!

It is not why I yell moo
at cows when we fly past
or why sweetis excite me
as fireworks also do too

It is not any other reason
I chuckle like a big child
and expect animals to talk
and wave at funny vehicles
and wolf down my food hot.

It is just me being me when I
run downstairs to look at sky
and let stressful thing go by
is just the way I do things I
maybe slower and overcautious
and is it too hard that I try

Try to be happy most of the time?
Colour with crayons and eat candy
toothouts ent so bad now trust me
an dentist might give you a lolly
your not just a big kid trying to
stay young your just being myself
next year I'll be one year older.

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Comments

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A wonderful celebration of self, Kahdai. Don't you change for anyone ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I love the way you talk of staying young, that is my sentiments exactly. Lovely read Kahdai. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks both, feel better now :) xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by WillSimpson on
Really lo\/ed this one, I cant decide whether its sad though, or happy, sort of like being disappointed you ha\/e to make some changes to fit in with the world. but secretly you know who you are inside xx

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yep exactly Thanks Will ^^ xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A smashing read, Kahdai. Well done and well said;-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Wow thanks Tina :) xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by kheldar on
Hi Kahdai Of your recent postings this is by far my favourite. I particularly enjoyed: "It is just me being me when I run downstairs to look at sky and let stressful thing go by is just the way I do things I maybe slower and overcautious and is it too hard that I try" As adults we tend to overcomplicate things, this poem excellently reminds us to nurture the child inside and to let it out whenever the occasion suits. Good stuff!! :--) xxx

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Submitted by Kahdai on
Yay thanks kheldar :D xxx I dont liik complicated because am bad at it :S

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "