Adrift

By mark p
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Dead-eyed, drifting, homeless rolling,
Bedroll beggars and streetwise kids
Buckfast couraged, words declaim
Shopdoors slumped and slurring,
Conflict victims tell tales al fresco,
armed with Special Brew and crutches,
half remembered past life stories,
urban streets their battleground.
Halfway homeward, slouched on buses,
Shiftless workers scrolling phonescreens,
Sending selfies, social postings,
Shaping , vaping - image is all.
A neon neverwhere bristles with happening,
A coin's flipside to another world's vista
Doorways open, reveal new thresholds,
drifting through life with a hatful of change.
( Another reworked older poem, which I think works)
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drifting to oblivion as you
drifting to oblivion as you describe it. adrift. but it is us that are bankrupt, allowing it.
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i think it works, too. Great
i think it works, too. Great lines, like "Bedroll beggars and streetwise kids / Buckfast couraged"
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