Elusive cherries

Cherry

By PipMic

Fri, 23 Jul 2010
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13 comments
 

Going for the cherry
is driving me crazy.

Those elusive cherries
that hang as a pair.
That tantalizing duo
that drives me to despair

For sure I'll be given it,
even if I write forever.
Dedication to the verse.
I will not be dissuaded ever.

Lost in my thoughts
I scramble for the word.
Searching for the rhyme
so it can be heard.

It should all be smooth and
the words must not grate.
They should click into place
as I try to narrate.

All will be done
when the cherries are hung.
Bang at the top
of the verse that I’ve done.

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Comments

Submitted by lenchenelf on
:-) Are you writing to your vision or genetically modifying it for mass production :-) atb Lena xx

 

Submitted by PipMic on
Gosh! what do you mean? :)

Submitted by lenchenelf on
Not to worry, I'm having a senior moment...more coffee needed :-) xx

 

Submitted by tcook on
That elusive fruity Hanging in pairs Not sure this makes sense. Work at this a bit and a cherry or two may well be yours!

Submitted by PipMic on
lololol.... senior moment... gosh it gets better.. I like to think its a good senior moment lol

Submitted by PipMic on
Hi tcook .... how about now?

Submitted by TREVOR MAYTUM on
Hi PipMic, thought I'd pop over to say in person I liked your poem. They're not the easiest things to write, are they?

Submitted by PipMic on
No they're not...Gosh its truly amazing, that two persons could have been thinking the same thing in the space of twenty four hours. Well at least you got the prize !!!

Submitted by tcook on
Spot on this time - and look what's happened!

Submitted by PipMic on
Yeepeeeeee! My first cherries ...lol

Submitted by TREVOR MAYTUM on
Congratulations, PipMic, I'm really pleased for you. keep it up, as they say... I'm sure there'll be more on the way (now there's a little rhyme...)

Submitted by PipMic on
thanks ... :)

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New PipMic Well earn't cherry! So,so pleased for you, makes one feel good inside yippeeee..to you. I used to love them,but can't chew them now.Or as kids,we dangle them on our ears,and even give,them apolish to shine! Like Robot cherry! on AbcTales whatever the reason for. I have five? whooo..eeee. julie xx