There Ain`t No Sun in Nightmares

By Syphon

Thu, 12 Jul 2012
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I have been chasing for something all my life
With no retreats and no regrets
I have felt the reaper breathing down my neck
And now I run
There ain`t no sun in nightmares
I see the wolves are coming
I have avoided them all my life
Now the sun is rising
Am I going to die?
If I keep running will I stay alive?
If I keep chasing will I find what I am looking for?
I feel a fugitive in my own home
There ain`t no sun in nightmares
So why do I burn?
If the reaper is going to catch me I wish he would
Because the sun is rising
And there ain`t no sun in nightmares

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As Far South As Down Can Go
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Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
After receiving your lovely comment, I decided to come and read some of your work too. I really enjoyed this piece. really like these lines; "I feel a fugitive in my own home There ain`t no sun in nightmares So why do I burn?" Beeme xx

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Submitted by Syphon on
Thanks for reading Beeme I am glad you enjoyed and I really value the feedback from you, thanks :)

Submitted by Jessiibear on
Man, these lines: If the reaper is going to catch me I wish he would Because the sun is rising And there ain`t no sun in nightmares Something about them; I like those ones especially. But the entire poem is brilliant. You're a wonderful poet Syphon. :)

Jess

Submitted by Syphon on
Wow thank you JessicaA really appreciate your comment made my day :)

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
Hello Syphon, nice to read some of your work. This poem is neat. Love the title and its place in the poem. Keep it up, you have great phrases. Richard LP
Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Syphon on
Thank you Richard I appreciate your feedback and thanks for reading.