A Long Road
By Vandeleur
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Son of God, the son of Mars, of Ares too
And the son of Ba’al Hammon
In the valley of shadows
I fear evil not
I face it evermore
Thy rod, thy staff
My Mk1 Lee Enfield
No.4
My protector
My paramour
What’s facing us is certain death
The many and the few
It might just be my luck runs out
Today or if not tomorrow’s draw
I’ll keep my faith those bullets sing
The names of others and not mine
My friends and enemies
Lured by sirens
To their final curtain call
The stench of death hangs heavy in air
Every step and every turn
I miss my home and fruit and beer
And the dew of Irish early morn
Three long years I’ve fought this fight
Across desert, country and town
I’ve held my nerve up to this point
But nerves wear thin
Blood runs cold
I fear never being reborn
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I thought the last two
I thought the last two stanzas of this were particularly effective, with the contrast between the 'stench of death' and the memories of home being very poignant. Also, in the second verse, the way the Lee Enfield is contrasted with the traditional rod and staff works very well. Such a thoughtful poem.
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Well constructed - I enjoyed
Well constructed - I enjoyed this very much. Welcome to ABCTales!
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