Pretty Stormy

By well-wisher

Tue, 03 Apr 2012
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I love your lightning flash;
your precious gems of hail
the passion of your thunder
the music of your wail.

You’re pretty when your angry,
you’re pretty when your sad
but when your smile comes out, oh my,
that’s when my heart’s most glad.

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Nice one. Made me feel all warm inside;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Anvar2 on
A very sweet poem, with the contrast between the storm and the smile working really well for me. Thanks for sharing.

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Intersting, and well worked structure! Shouldnt it be in the poetry section though? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on
Oh, lovely. Nicely written. Ambiguous? I can almost hear Wagner!

Parson Thru