Knickers
  By winking_tiger
Thu, 06 May 2010    
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    Six years later
After the frantic fervour of lust
After the shared washing basket
After the sleepless nights of newborn bliss
Six years later
I am covering up and locking the bathroom door
Intimate only with my used up form
And not to be seen in my knickers.
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this poem shattered me, it's
    Permalink    Submitted by maggyvaneijk on   
  this poem shattered me, it's simplicity infiltrates and evokes many emotions. I hope you won't have to keep that door locked for long, thanks for sharing.
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I think the simplicity works
    Permalink    Submitted by insertponceyfre... on   
  I think the simplicity works very well too - I really like this poem
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Really good - sums a lot of
    Permalink    Submitted by Margharita on   
  Really good - sums a lot of things up.  This one will stay in my mind.
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