The Sands of Time
By darkenwolf
Fri, 27 Aug 2010
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Tick follows tock follows tick.
But the moments between tick and tock,
They grow ever longer.
Seconds stretch to minutes,
Minutes to hours…
Each new day an eternity,
And I am become the immortal,
Told of in tales of old,
The man ever seeking but one thing,
An ending to this infinite existence.
Tick follows tock follows tick.
The sunset brings new hope,
For if the day can end,
If darkness can fall,
Perhaps mine eyes shall, in finality, close.
Tick follows tock follows tick…
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Effasive is a fluid like
Effasive is a fluid like water.Look it up in Aristoteles. Vodka is a vegetable- yes potatoes and methylated spirits my good ness- I don't drink vodka. I am sure that wine is a vegetable sometimes animalistic. NO fruit of course- chocolates have fruit in them too and this is very very healthy so eat as much as you like. As to the vodka- potatoes should not be eaten raw. You would have to make cheese fondue. No that is russian kirsch. Well they are from russia- like the dolls
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No its not age with the
No its not age with the language- well I guess a little- I just never use it unless I try to write something and that is getting difficult since I don't speak it. It all gets very theoretical then.
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That is very kind of you. I
That is very kind of you. I may take you up on that. Oh I won't disappear all together. I'll stick around for a long time. I can always comment. that's not too difficult. I have been studying Pratchett. What a character!! Must read some of his. We have an english bookstore in Copenhagen I can visit.
Oh I'll be supportive, I promise;)
The thing about chocolate is that it tastes so nice that I have to find excuses otherwise I could never eat it. I use it as medication, just like a nice ripe peach. Yummy ;D I'm not addicted to it, thank god. Nor am I addicted to vodka thank god- ha ha
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new Highhat No! you can't
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Highhat
No! you can't go, your english
is good, and I enjoy the stories.
And poems if you can pick up on
spelling mistakes. I better look out?
He' he! I Never used to check mine a year
ago, I started on AbcTales.
Or the spelling checker.
Nor previewed it first
No wonder I didn' get any where!
Had no time!
Then computer is his not mine, on
out table, we share it!
Have a good week-end. The Sun is
powerful to-day.
julie x
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Tick follows tock follows
Tick follows tock follows tick…
This is very boring. Let’s go rather tick tick tock, tick tick tock, tick tick tock. Like a waltz you know. Or even better, tickety tickety tock, tickety tickety tock. Must we really always go tick tock tick tock? Or even worse, tick tick tick tick …
“Each new day an eternity,
And I am become the immortal,
Told of in tales of old,
The man ever seeking but one thing,
An ending to this infinite existence.”
A guy once said to me “We don’t live forever you know” and I replied “And thank God for that!”
Time to go! Nolan
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Another lovely poem, great
Another lovely poem, great rythem this one, lots of funny comments again! K x
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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"The Wild still lingered in
"The Wild still lingered in him and the wolf in him merely slept."
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