sad old man taking a shit

Cherry

By JupiterMoon

Tue, 04 Aug 2015
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6 comments
 

sad old man taking a shit

it swings out of me,
like a tired conker.
a sigh in the water.

i don't know when,
i started looking
in on it,
curled in the bowl.

mercifully,
blood free.

i hold on
to the scorched
toilet roll dispenser;
wondering when,
my balls
became last year's
arid pine cones.

just an old man,
taking a shit.
muttering
spent glories
to no one.

Certificate PG
Poem
Hear the Hush of the Axe Behind You
Rant
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Thanks for sharing this precious moment, JupiterMoon.

Parson Thru

Submitted by VeraClark on

You capture every moment of cracking one out in perfect detail. I'm sorry about your pinecones being arrid, but thank you so much for sharing this brilliant piece with all.

 

Submitted by london_calling79 on

This is fucking amazing. Poignant, funny and clever. 

 

Submitted by Pat G on

Love it. Number four on the Bristol Scale. Perfectly formed. 

Submitted by airyfairy on

Rats.  Someone beat me to it with the Bristol Scale.  Loved the poem. 

Submitted by scratch on

Fundamentally good, this one.