Now
By Parson Thru
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There’s no irony in your message;
No jokey evasion of what is;
Simple words of personal truth
recorded in your hand
and folded shut
find daylight now in mine;
In this moment
life is all that it can be.
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I loved this. Looks simple
I loved this. Looks simple but feels intricate. I really liked 'find daylight now in mine.'
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A communication, an honest
A communication, an honest sharing that you can trust is so precious. Also the personal nature of the message/words conveyed by the folding shut, and finding daylight in yours. Rhiannon
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I don't know if this is to do
I don't know if this is to do with Valentine's but it is the PERFECT thing for today and an eternity from all the plastic looking flowers and over packaged chocolates. Pared down, deep and true
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I like how clean this is, how
I like how clean this is, how precise, no messing about. Life is all it can be, you can't say that too often, that's a rare moment to be cherished.
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lovely. I opted for silly
lovely. I opted for silly irony yesterday and so did 'him down the road' Your moment is good.
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Very pretty. Beautiful final
Very pretty. Beautiful final line. You have a great natural style, like your writing is completely a part of you
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