Love

Cherry

By Denzella

Mon, 02 Apr 2018
  • 2495 reads
8 comments
 

Oh, Charles, you looked so handsome in your uniform when you left. I hate us being separated but tell me, darling, do you think of me when you’re up there? Then in my head, I hear the words that fill me with dread, ‘First floor, Ladies Wear and Lingerie...

 

Certificate PG
Story
Stories & Monologues
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by airyfairy on

Raised a chuckle, Denzella.  And thank you for one of the most productive IPs we've had!  

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello airy,

Thank you for reading and commenting.  I too enjoyed having another stab at a 50-word story.

Moya.                                                                              

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Top humour, Moya, and top marks from me.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Luigi,

Thank you for reading and commenting on my little offering.  When I have replied to the comments I shall start to read the other stories.

Moya x

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Very funny - and what airyfairy said, it's been ages since we had such a popular IP - Thank you!

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Insert,

Thank you for reading and commenting.  I'm so pleased that my idea went down well. Off to read the            others now.

Thank you to the editors for my cherries.

 

 

Submitted by Alice Hamilton on

This made me laugh. Thanks for suggesting the IP - such fun! By the way, I noticed your query about font size - I copy and paste from my iPad.

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Thank you but alas I don't have an iPad.  I'm still trying to fathom my iPhone.