Through Our Country Window

Cherry

By Richard L. Provencher

Sun, 23 Jul 2023
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11 comments
 

Through Our Country Window

 

Rivulets stream

thinly

down landscape

sheerness

falling as a multiplicity

of confetti drops

bubbling & sprinting

onto aspen leaves

re-directed

into

rabbit shelters under

spreading fir

boughs

and we wish to

join them

in the joy of recovery.

 

(c) 2023 Richard L. Provencher

Truro, Nova Scotia, Canada

Certificate U
Poem
Enter the Meadow
Nature

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

"Rivulets stream

thinly 

down landscapes 

sheerness.."

 

An evocative, picturesque portrait of the path of rain. Enjoyed, Richard. Paul 

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thank you kind folks for comments and the beautiful cherries - they are very encouraging to me, for this first poem in about 3 months. I had been dealing with various illnessess and feel much better now. So back to writing - something I enjoy immensely. -RIchard LP 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Lovely! A cabin in the woods, a warm fireside and wild flowers in a mason jar.

I wondered why you're not writing, speedy recovery! ABC is very good for you.

Richard Cheers! Tom Brown

 

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Such an encouraging comment, Tom! Thanks.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Such an encouraging comment, Tom! Thanks.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

So nice to hear from writer-friends/authors, Rhiannon!

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

You seem to be feeling the joy of your recovery in this verse, Richard. I hope you keep more well. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Turlough on

A lovely poem with words really that bring the scene to life.

I always find it interesting to read about people's homes and their environs. Perhaps 'through my window' would make a good inspirational point one week, if it hasn't been done already.

There can't be many of us who haven't got a window or two.

Turlough

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Mercie Turlough - your kind thoughts are a welcome.  Your writing is very good and quite funny too. Observe carefully what is outside your window and something magic will take place.

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Turlough on

Merci à toi aussi!

I already spend half of my life looking out of my window. It's a habit that has stayed with me all my life. It fascinates me.

 

Turlough