Curious Magic

Cherry

By skinner_jennifer

Tue, 10 Oct 2023
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15 comments
 

What I feel takes me dew

drenched mingling with

nature, quietly slipping

away from reality into

reverie of fantasy;

 

imagination rambling

along where enigmatic

ambiance sets me free,

tracing a waiting trail

carpeted with richness

of autumn leaves...

 

then beneath haunted

shadows of naked trees,

from flimsy branch one

lonely leaf clings as if

afraid to let go –

 

I too feel that strength

to hold onto life, upon

which has enduring

virtuosity; when feeling

energy of exchanging

musings with whoever;

 

taking delight in shared

stimulating atmosphere,

for what is life but the

meeting of like minded;

 

we fall from dreamy

waterfall into flowing

inspirational rivers of

thought, soaking our

aspirations while

quenching thirst

for wake of new

tomorrows.

 

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Comments

Submitted by celticman on

we alays chase our dreams Jenny. New tomorrows is what we crave. 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jack,

I think us writers need to chase our dreams, they are so magical when we are able to create and have fun too.

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Beautifully said Jenny - well done

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi insert,

so glad you liked my words, I just had to express the way I was feeling.

Thank you for reading and letting me know.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Holding on to life like a  clinging leaf: quite a picture! especially as we get older. And the stimulations of shared conversations, and fellowship flow, inspiring our thought into rivers.

I empathise with that, though also it means to me the flow of refreshment and guidance from the Spirit of God once in relationship with him.

Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Rhiannon,

I think it's so healthy and important to have somewhere to share thoughts, and express what we're feeling.

It's always nice to hear others views.

Many thanks for sharing yours.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by marandina on

"...we fall from dreamy

waterfall into flowing

inspirational rivers of

thought.."

A lovely anaology and a lingering optimism amongst your words. Nicely done, of course. Paul

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Bless you Paul,

it's always a pleasure to hear from you. I hope the river of flowing inspiration lifts you in your writing.

Thank you so much for reading and your lovely words.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Many thanks for the lovely cherries Editors, they were a wonderful surprise.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Rhymes And Reasons on

'I'll Always Be A Word Man - Better Than A Bird Man.' Jim Morrison. Words Is What A Poet Weaves His Magic Spell With. Lovely Verse! heart 

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Jacques,

I just love...love...love Jim Morrison's poetry, he always writes with such emotion and takes the reader on a journey of freeing the mind, having no hang ups, but just expressing what life means to him.

I have to say, I enjoyed the message of suddenly being able to see the true light coming out of the darkness, in your piece called Nirvana. There can be so many situations where coming into the light is meaningful, and you touching on the subject was inspiring to read.

Thank you for reading and I'm grateful to you for letting me know you liked. May we continue to weave that magic spell of words.

Jenny. smiley

 

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

your poems are always so comforting :0) I admire so much too, how you express feelings, completely abstract things, in words. You really are a magician!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Good morning Di,

it's warming to me that you find my poems comforting. Sometimes I just like to escape the realities of real life, which is so much easier now I'm retired, but then I've always been one for drifting off into my imagination.

Thankfully I have a partner who keeps me grounded, we're like yin and yang. with me the female who is away with the fairies, while he's the man that supports me, but has his feet firmly grounded in the here and now, which is not a bad thing at all.

Many thanks for your kind words which were lovely to read, and I'm happy you liked.

Jenny. smiley

 

Submitted by Turlough on

Don't let go of that flimsy branch Jenny. A bit of mulch round your roots and a mild winter and you'll be grand, I'm sure.

I completely agree with what's been said here about escapism. Reading the words of others and writing my own takes up part of every day for me now, armed with my little note book and my little phone. 

Your writing is particularly inspiring. It takes me to your places where I have never been and to similar places of my own that perhaps I should appreciate more than I do. You're a regular wake up call.

I'm sorry it's taken me a while to read this. I've been away recently (twice) and I'm playing catch up. I'll try harder from now on.

Turlough

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hi Turlough,

I'm overjoyed that you find my writing inspiring, especially as I'm having writers block at present...though I'm sure now I;ve spoken it probably will return, wink

I always welcome your comments and completely understand about catching up with reading, so no apology needed.

Thank you kindly for reading and sharing your thoughts.

Jenny. smiley